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Virtual Game - The adventure of the divinity Max is a boy who attends computer science high school; Oliver always makes fun of him since he is an online gamer, so he considers him a full-fledged nerd. Over the weekend he dedicates himself to finishing the game he bought.A classmate shows Max a brand new game, and would like him to try playing it, he tries in every way to convince him to buy it, the game of deities where the winner will receive a cash prize.Max doesn't believe that in this game money was offered as a prize for the winner.At first he refuses, but then thinking about it, his father has some shop debts to pay.So he runs and heads to the video game store.Max enters the videogame shop, asks the sales assistant about the new game, she shows him the advertisement attached to the wall and advises him to try this game in which there are 300 thousand players online with a prize pool up for grabs.After returning home, the boy does some online research about the game; then he puts on the virtual visor to connect and enters the game, creating his virtual character and finding himself in a remote forest.In the forest he is chased by some Goblins, then he meets a semi-human girl and a Tank and so once they reach the city they are taken to a temple where they have to decipher the codes on the wall to get the power gem.They leave the city after refueling, take a Jeep Wrangler and head towards the enemy who awaits them in their trap, but once they reach the bridge, they have to face a werewolf who awaits their arrival.Max with his companions meets the enemy, who, observing the moon, transforms into a werewolf and begins to launch blows; Max jumps onto the shield with a run-up and, with the magic of the wind, launches a thrust from above and knocks down the enemy.After the battle he takes the potion to heal his life points; by accessing his information he receives a warrior emblem for defeating the werewolf, so he receives the thanks of the girl held prisoner and gives him the piece of the power gem.After defeating the werewolf and taking the gem; Max was about to return to the city, but a crow steals his gem, so he has to deal with Alex and a fight occurs; Max destroys his armor, but is shot by the enemy.The opponent thus destroys his bow, Max is at the end of his strength and his life points are about to go to zero, with the last energy in his body, he knocks down the enemy with a kick to the stomach and so Alex wins and the gem breaks in two parts.After the battle, Max becomes the winner.In the end Max disconnects from the game and his father gives him the news that he has received a letter where he has paid his debts and the shop will receive many customers, who are waiting for the opening.here is my story, if you are interested the commissions are open, so contact me in notes.#story #writing #virtualgame #virtual #game #commissionopen  
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A summer sex in a Love Hotels Mei and Fuji are childhood friends, so by change they meet on the street.Fuji: << Come with me to America!>> He wants to become an actor and as his manager he chose none other than his childood friend Mei.Mei at the Age of 21 decided to accept his friend's offer and help him realize his dream, so he could be by his side. So they leave Japan to go to America, now after nine years both are thirty.......Fuji is interviewed in a television program, where he talks about his acting debut in the film playing the role of a super hero, where he saying that he wanted to do it from an early age and so he enjyed acting a lot.Fuji and Mei now live together. Fuji has a lot of interviews to do for the film, so he decided to take some time off......Mei arrives in the car to pick him up.Mei compliments Fuji, after the interview they were about to go back to their apartment but......Mei: << Is there a place you would like to visit before going home? >>Fuji: << I want to visit a Love Hotels. >>Mei gets very allarmed.......Mei: << Wat did you say!? >>Wile Mei drives behind the wheel, Fuji chooses the hotel venue to go to, but Mei didn't agree before.......Mei: << Explain to me why you want to go to a Love Hotel and with me? >>So after having come a long way, they finally arrive in a Love Hotel.In a normal hotel but Mei felt embarssed.In this room there was a double bed and also a bathroom, so Mei was curious that he went to see how it was done.........Mei: << The bathroom is very large and there is also a sauna. >>There were also some strange objects such as a plastic mat and special bags.Fuji joins Mei in the bathroom holding out his hand to get uo, but Mei was opening the sachets not knowing what they were.Fuji: << Mei come here. >> Mei: << What are they? >>Fuji grabs Mei in a hugFuji: << Mei lend me your body for a while. >>Fuji so picks him up and takes him with him passionately and starts unbuttoning his shirt collar.Mei: << Right now I'm being kissed by Fuji.>>Fuji starts talking off his shirt; but Mei doesn't know what to do now and would like to push him away, Fuji starts to unbutton his trousers.Fuji: << You don't like Mei? >>So they both look at each other and after taking Mei's pants off he is give lotion, so that Fuji can insert his fingers very easily.Fuji: << Tell me where you like best. >>Mei: << If you touch me I will come for sure. >>Fuji: << Damn has anyone else done this with you before? >>So Mei makes a very strange face Fuji: << I never thought I'd see you make such an erotic face. >>So Fuji starts to penetrate inside himMei: << Fuji what are you doing >>Fuji: << I wanted to take this vacation because I wanted to do it with you, Mei. >>Fuji: << Get ready......>>So Fuji starts to penetrate him deeply.Mei: << I'm coming......>>After a long night of sex in a Love Hotels mei falls asleep....... 
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The 100 Gray Girls Attack Of 1947These facts are not narrated in 1947, but we are in the epoch of the year 2010. This story begins in a modern American city.In the evening the cities are less crowded than usual, in the streets we find a few cars passing, some puddles left by yesterday's storm; some passer-by in the streets passes, trampling the water from the puddles which makes a great noise; some street lamps flash illuminating the dark streets; stray cats on the streets rummage through garbage cans, looking for food; by dropping a garbage can and with a loud noise they wake up the surrounding neighborhood; a little girl is awakened by the noise, so she looks out to see what is happening outside, in the hours of the night;looking out he finds four friends drunk from what they have drunk, the girl chases them away telling them that she will call the police if they don't go away; in the end the drunken group ran away. The characteristics of the three boys are: Ben and Thalia are tall and thin, both have blue eyes and curly blond hair; Instead Tommy is a boy of short stature and a bit chubby and has black hair and a curly cut, a bit long. So one day Thalia comes to school, where that day she was dressed differently than usual, she was wearing an open shirt with blue shorts, she didn't have the usual school uniform.Thalia thus enters an empty classroom and begins to change clothes, wears a sparkling blue dress and begins to wear a lot of make-up, smears lipstick on her lips, to appear more beautiful, and then heads to the gym for prom.but first she reaches her locker, and strange objects begin to come out, shoes, printer paper, biro pens, until she is sucked into the locker, where inside it contained a space-time vortex; thus she is sucked into another era.Due to the space-time vortex, his body has had changes; Thalia is a girl who is 12 years old and finds herself in the modern era in the year 2010 and not in 1947, she was escaping from the colorless Graywold dimension, after having been trapped for 50 years together with her classmates.In the modern era so suddenly in a telephone booth, a space-time vortex appears inside it, at that moment a gentleman was passing by, who, intrigued by the light that emanated from that booth,was curious to know what was inside, suddenly an enormous foot appears which destroys the cabin, and trampling with an enormous hand, the gentleman who is crushed by this gigantic hand and can no longer free himself, where with his enormous weight he is crushed and killed, splattering blood from all sides.Thalia thus emerges from this vortex in the form of a giant, like skyscrapers. Due to the time she traveled in the vortex her clothes were torn, so she now wears a green striped bikini.Thalia feels so confused, she looks around and sees small people, “What's going on, and what place have I ended up in? ” Thalia said.Thalia thus starts walking, causing destruction and terror in the crowd, people start running away, seeing a girl of enormous size.Thalia walking causes strong earthquakes and cracks in the ground, walking through the narrow streets, with a huge foot she crushes cars, she feels pain under her feet, so she starts grabbing objects she has never seen before, starts grabbing flashing neon billboards, grabs sports cars, and observes that a person is inside, starts shaking the car and it knocks the person over and as he falls he blows his brains out, impaling himself with a metal blade and dying, he throws the car he was holding in his hands.Thalia trips over a parked car, falling on her butt and making a loud noise. Talia sitting on the ground, “I'm sorry, I didn't want to create any destruction.” Thalia said to the crowd; people yell at her, a bunch of guys start pounding her leg telling her she has to go away. The 12-year-old giant begins to feel very hungry, who suddenly goes crazy and no longer understands anything, and starts eating fast food, restaurants, everything he finds in front of his eyes, thus eating all the food supplies and finding a source of water in the center of the city, so Thalia starts drinking all the water she can find.After eating and drinking a lot, Thalia begins to hear strange noises in her stomach, so she starts making powerful eruptions “BUURRRRRRPPPPPPP”; up to making the whole city shake creating earthquakes, to cars with alarms, up to people screaming from the loud noise, up to blood coming out of their ears from the commotion caused by Thalia, who starts apologizing “ Oh, sorry everyone ”; for the mess caused by Thalia, he starts taking one of the citizens, a little boy named Willy, who starts playing with him; Willy gets very angry and starts screaming, Thalia gets scared by mistake and breaks a skyscraper.After Thalia has kidnapped Willy, the military arrives with helicopters to try to capture her, but Willy realizes that Thalia doesn't want to hurt anyone, so he gets in the way.“Run Thalia.” Willy said.Thalia for his great gesture of Willy kisses him and she runs away and hides in the woods.Some of the little adults who are terrified, run away from the giant girl who spews high-pitched swear words in pain, creating more destruction.Some of the townspeople start to say profanity about Thalia.Thalia bumps into tall skyscrapers and damages them with her butt, stepping on various things, such as injured people, or broken glass car remains.Some people lost their lives in this great war, some of the citizens, died, suffering damage to their bodies, until they broke and opened in half, showing the entrails and guts coming out of their bodies.Thalia was heading towards the woods, but suddenly, in front of her she finds a soldier maneuvering his helicopter, who loses control, the soldier at the wheel was no longer able to maneuver the helicopter which accidentally crashed into Thalia who had blocked herself with one arm to defend herself from the great explosion.Thalia, frightened by the explosion, returned to normal form and together with Willy they ran away into the woods.Story commission for @Supermarvel5... 
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Sonic in love ( Sonamy) My name is Sonic The Hedgehog, I'm 15 and I'm the fastest hedgehog in the world.My team and I defeat Eggman every day and never get tired of it, but today....I had defeated egghead and those spider mice whose color made me want to vomit.I felt tired and told my friends that I would go home and rest.and now I'm on my swing when suddenly I hear someone knocking.I open my eyes and see Amy with a puzzled look." Are you OK? " He asked as he approached me."Yes, I'm just a little tired, no big deal" I said reassuring her."Look uh Sonic, I'm sorry about what happened," he said.I don't understand."Because what did you do ?." I asked opening one eye."For the fact that we all fell at the feet of that spider rat," he said.Oh."It doesn't matter.... don't worry" I forced myself.Ok, I would like to tell her that she was really stupid, but those green eyes don't make me say anything anymore.he approaches me, what does he want to do?.Don't tell me he wants to kiss me?.No, no, no.We were inches away, I could hear her breathing.Before he kissed me."Maybe it's better if you go to sleep Amy, come with me to the north side of the island tomorrow" I lied, it's only 7pm and we're not going anywhere tomorrow." OK have a good rest " He just said before leaving.I feel a little guilty about this but for the best.It's not that I don't like Amy but she was running a little too much.I go back to sleep but I hear another voice calling me., AmyI was going too fast with him.But now I understand that he is not interested in me.I was embarrassed I admit it, I was never good in words. As soon as I apologized to him he looked at me with a puzzled look but, I could read anger in his green eyes.I come home, prepare dinner, watch a movie and then go to sleep on a deck chair out on the balcony.The stars were beautiful but I have a bad feeling.  One Piece : Luffy vs Vulcan DragonLuffy and his crew head to a new island to ask the village chief for information about a mysterious fruit that whoever eats it, takes control of their mind from a monstrous being.Arrived on the island Vulcan Dragon, Nico Robin is kidnapped by a tribe of the village.Sanji thus feels very disappointed that he couldn't stop that tribe.To recover Nico Robin and save her, Luffy seeing smoke in the sky climbs to the top of a tree, to see better.Sanji and Luffy will have to save her before she is pushed onto the incandescent volcano, as a sacrifice to the god of fire; but she is bonded with sea-galmatolite and as a result cannot use its powers.Sanji begins to follow in the footsteps left by the natives, in order to get to their village.So Luffy and his crew will have to defeat their opponents in order to reach Nico Robin.Eventually Rubber runs to the rescue as Nico Robin falls into the volcano, but Luffy saves her.Luffy finally becomes enraged and destroys the volcano where they sacrifice many women and the spell that controlled the minds of the tribe is dissolved; so as thanks for undoing the spell, the tribe told him about the mysterious fruit, but gave him a feast and a day of rest before setting off again on their journey.  The island of heartbeatsthis text is taken from the book that I'm legend, tell me what you think, if you want one written, contact me in chat.<< Do you feel it? >> the child asks, turning towards the adult.At the precise moment of the question, the man is forty years old and the valves of his heart have opened and closed about one billion and four hundred and seventy million times.For three hundred and thirty-three days he has started calling things by their proper names again, again the world matters to him where it will end up, who will win the elections in Japan, how long it will take men to fill the sea with plastic.Again he is afraid of dying.<< Do you feel it? >> repeats the child.And it's like a prayer because, if even an adult hears it, it means it's real.<< Not yet. >>it is after leaving the path that slips between small houses made of wood and sheet metal, when the landscape of Teshima splits in two, and green rice fields open to the right and left, it is there that the air begins to vibrate more strongly.The child does not repeat the question but observes the adult intensely.The man nods this time.Now he hears it.To contain his emotion he bends on his knees, reaching the height of the tiny man in front of him, firm like a Moses in the act of opening the waves.If before he heard nothing, now there is only that noise. Pam-pam, bam-bam, doki doki, thump thump. The choline seems to vibrate completely.The child rests his palm on his own chest, closes his eyes.Doef doef, boum boum, tu tump.<< We are close.>>The child rests his palm on his own chest, closes his eyes. It contracts to the irregular beating of the waves. The tides lengthen the pulsation, sometimes missing one or two. But then they always repeat......[TO BE CONTINUED.....]#COMMISSIONOPEN #WRITING #COPYWRITING #TRANSLATE #PAYPAL  
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Honey, I blew up your wifeIn the spring season, in the suburbs of New York.Scarlet drinks a cup of coffee one morning before tending to her garden; her husband Jeff, on the other hand, went to work.Scarlet looks out the window and sees her garden, so by mistake, she pours the fertilizer into the cup of coffee.Then she goes out in a dressing gown with panties and bra, noticing the plants she decides to take care of them and make them grow.The plants have all withered and so he is saddened; then scarlet drinks the coffee with the fertilizer in it and so it grows and becomes a giant.Jeff then climbs onto a skyscraper and makes his wife drink coffee; she has to drink it before her mega foot destroys the cars and the whole city.Scarlet after ingesting the coffee, she returns to normal, and eventually Jeff kisses her and they go back to their room.commission for @mevalen... 
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